Audience Feedback

After Design Idea One

''Good starting point, however it will need a release date to let the audience know when it will be released'' Kayleigh Ploughman

''Maybe experiment with different compositions, like putting the title at the top or maybe on top of the image'' Keisha Chan

After Design Idea Two

''I like the general layout of the poster however I think it would be more effective with a dark background, making it more fitting to the horror genre.'' Rebecca Chatterton

''Experiment with the colours and maybe have more than one image'' Keisha Chan

After Design Idea Three

''I like the black background, it makes it more scary. I like the red too, it makes me think of blood and scary films'' Harry Bailey

''Need to add an image now and maybe look at different fonts and different background colours, the black might be a bit too harsh'' Keisha Chan

After Design Idea Four

''I think the image is effective because it is clear that one character stands out from the others but it is still a mystery as to why. However it does not display the typical codes and conventions of a film poster, it is missing features such as a tagline. I think it is a good start but needs work on it.'' Rebecca Chatterton

''Really like the image, it really attracts me to the poster and the font looks amazing the shadowy bit makes it seem really secretive. However you need to add the tagline like you said in the plan'' Keisha Chan

'' It looks to me like this is supposed to be a horror film because of the dark background. The smirk on the girls face makes her stand out from the others, and the dead expressions on their faces make us think that she may be the killer. I think there should be something at the bottom telling us who produced it, as it it unclear who has made the film and whether any famous actors in it.'' Ed Maskell


After Design Idea Five

''I like the simplicity, just the tagline and the name , shows that the film is well recognised , doesn't need an explanation. I like the fact that everyone is taken from the same picture, rather than seperate images edited together, brings a seriousness to the expressions on the faces and sets Holly's open eyes apart from the rest.'' Georgie Laming

''Really love the black background, makes all text stand out. Also think the font is good, highlighting the P is a very good idea. Don't film posters usually have directors names and stuff in small print at the bottom? maybe think about adding that.'' Michael Wilson

''Like the red P it looks a bit like a dagger and reminds me of death and blood which links in with the genre of your film trailer.'' Keisha Chan

FINAL
''The look on the main character's face is cool. No expression is so much scarier than angry face, makes you wonder what the nutter is thinking. The "P" looks cool, the red really stands out. Also the red makes me think of danger and blood, really like it and makes me want to see the film'' Cathy Connor

''The addition of the 'coming soon' and the credits reinforces the fact its a film and gives it a professional edge.'' Georgie Laming

''In the image I love the way attention is drawn to the main character because she is the only one with her eyes open. But you are then drawn to the other characters because of the criss cross, really effective composition.'' Keisha Chan